(This post is in reference to a challenge thrown by a blogger friend Princess poo(a very avid writer and one of the best blogger I have seen) via Indiblogger to choose who I feel is the best, My mom or my dad. So here it goes... )
I came to this world,
by the blessings of you two,
You are the forms of almighty,
You are the forms of almighty,
Incarnated yourselves
for me.
But between all the pains
you took,
And the sacrifices that
you both made
Could I get any
variance,
That will helps me to
choose, Who is the best among you?
When I was born,
Mom it was you whom I first
saw,
The warmth of your love
Through your eyes it
flowed
Embracing you and
ruffling your hair
Sitting calmly there
were you Dad.
And when my little arms
Stretched and touched
your faces
In ecstasy, you both were
mounted with tears.
With the contentment
you both, showered that day,
Could I be able to
choose, who is the best among you?
To wake up early, even
when you are sick.
You neither care about
your health nor your happiness,
are always there to
feed me and give
on time, every time,
everything that I wish.
And at times, when fear
surrounds me,
You cover me with your
drape, and I sleep in peace.
And then you stand in
front like an amazon
protecting me from evil spirits and fighting all along.
As I grow up, my needs
go high,
Dad you never fail to
give whatever I require,
You work dawn to dusk
just to ensure
That I get everything
and my future is secured
and whenever obstacles come, you never let me retreat
make me tenacious and give the confidence that I need
make me tenacious and give the confidence that I need
Whenever, around me,
when the things become tight
Your words come as a
rescuer,
and helps me win all
the battles that I fight.
When I reminisce upon,
it makes me daze
Not even an imperceptible difference
in the way that you both cared.
I am left without a
single point,
not even a clue
That helps me to
decide,
Who is the best, among
you.
After thinking a lot I
got my answer
it isn’t in your sacrifices
but in the thing that
makes you strong.
Whenever the hard storm
strikes us to raze,
you fight it together, protecting
each-other’s ways.
Yes, it is your
immortal love and the bond that you have
that makes every problem just a piece of cake
Lame I am to think you as
two
for you are two
different bodies but a single soul
how could I even choose
when the entity is one,
together, you are the
best, that’s what I can call.
Wow Sri this is awesome :).
ReplyDeleteSuch a heartfelt poem :).
My heart was smiling reading this :D :).
I loved the way you concluded the poem :).
Our parents are infact one right :).
You have done a lot of justice to the topic :D.
Just loved it man :).
HATS OFF :).
beautifully written be PD...
ReplyDeleteTrue feelings
OMG! Awesome.. you are too good!! Fantastic.. :) Superb!! Loved it.. very true you cannot say who's the best or whom you like more! :| very well expressed..
ReplyDeletevery well written and i must say if this is inspired by your parents you are very lucky indeed
ReplyDeletetoo good to read and feel my own parents. so all parents are same in the country at least! they care so much for us. thanks for blogging this and sharing on indibloggger... :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful- touchy
ReplyDeleteThank you for allowing me to enter the world you've created and never give up this passion which illuminates you, bringing light into so many souls. (read more on my blog):)
ReplyDeleteVery very beautiful Sridhar. Great work dude.
ReplyDeleteHeart touching poem.....I also loved the p.s too!
ReplyDeleteI am yet to read another poetry which can so easily enters through my eyes and the fragarence of this flower is ever stored in my membrane percolating to the grey cell to flow through the nerves and come back again and again.
ReplyDeleteThis,.... just made me speechless
ReplyDeletesimply wow!! speechless nice 1
ReplyDeleteWOW.
ReplyDeleteA bang on answer to the challenge ;)
So true, parents are "one"
Loved it!
aah! awesome and heart-touching poem... will have to learn some skills from you... :D :D :P
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ReplyDeleteA sincere and honest poem. Ryt said we can never choose betwn d two neither can we compare the two.....
ReplyDeleteGood Post
ReplyDeleteHeaven Lies Under The Feet Of The Mother.
Thy Lord hath decreed that ye worship none but Him, and that ye be kind to parents. Whether one or more attain old age in thy life, say not to them a word of contempt, nor repel them, but address them in terms of honor. And out of kindness, lower to them the wing of humility, and say, “my Lord! bestow on them Thy Mercy, even as they cherished me in childhood.” (17: 23,24)
What a wonderful poem :)
ReplyDeleteSpecially for Mother's Day?
This was a challenge from POO...
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